An extract from the chapter I'm currently working on:
When they eventually broke apart, their breathing was laboured.
Sharing the bottle they both drank the water until it was drained. He
reached for her again but she stopped him.
'I better check in with Sam. I'm staying at her flat tonight and
don't want to get separated from her.'
He let out a breath, laughing as he did so and shaking his head.
'Okay, just give me a minute.'
Spotting the lit up Ladies sign, Chloe stood. 'I'll be back in a
minute.' Taking the bottle from his hand, she swopped it with the one
on the floor, taking a swig from the one she held. 'And don't drink
my beer.'
Yep, she's headed for trouble! Very well written!!
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