Monday, 20 August 2012

The Glass House - extracts

A few snippets from the work in progress.


From Chapter Two:


        A deep, satisfying warmth filled Caitlin, once again safe in her sanctuary. Her glass house. No ordinary structure of glass and aluminium, but a perfect piece of Victorian architecture and engineering, sitting at the edge of a walled garden, in a property once owned by Caitlin's grandparents. Now in her ownership and care, it looked stunning, with its dwarf brick walls, sparkling glass and white, cast iron frame, topped with a ridge of fleur-de-lis, but it was a very different picture when she first inherited it. Caitlin’s heart had swelled with sympathy when she first glimpsed the rusted framework, most of the glass broken and what little remained so black with dirt it was unrecognisable, crumbling brickwork, overgrown with nettles and layers of mud so thick they could have sent a geologist to heaven.

From Chapter Twelve (a little steamier and names removed to protect the identities of those involved - you'll have to wait unit some fabulous publisher decides it's brilliant - or at least until I put these chapters up on Authonomy - to find out who they are):

         She had a moment to take in the walls of glass, overlooking Queen's Island before the pair fell to the leather sofa. Kisses bruised lips, hands brushed over clothing. He shrugged off his suit jacket. She sought the buttons on his shirt and opened them, pulling it free from his trousers and pushing it off his arms. She unbuckled his belt and opened his trousers. His legs pressed hard against hers, his weight pushing her against the leather which warmed and moulded to them. His hands found the edge of her dress and raised it over her thighs, revealing the line of fine lace that edged that day's most thought about purchase. His fingers traced the line, his weight shifted sideways, as he followed it across her thigh and between her legs. As his knuckle grazed her she lifted her hips and parted her legs. His hands moved up, over the delicate black lace shorts, pushing the dress higher, over her waist.
        'I want to see the rest of this,' he said, continuing to reveal the matching bustier.
She sat up, turning round so he could unzip the dress and remove it. Keeping her back against him, he kissed her shoulder, her neck, he traced circles around her nipple. Slipping the bustier straps off her shoulders, he began to unhook it, freeing her breasts to his touch.
        
        Standing in front of her, he pushed his trousers and underwear to the floor. She took him in her hand, teasing him first with her tongue and then her mouth, only stopping when he pulled away from her and brought her to her feet. 
        The lace shorts skimmed down her thighs and over her knees. She began to remove the shoe but his hand held her ankle. 'Keep them on.' 
        She halted and he eased the shorts over one foot, then the other. Discarding them he kissed her ankle, the inside of her knee, then her thigh. His fingers began to tease and probe until she brought him back to the sofa and he once again pressed against her, her hips answered his movements, while he held the heels of those twinkling shoes.

From Chapter Thirteen (during a tour of Titanic Belfast):

        In complete quiet, Caitlin watched as the camera relayed video of the broken ship and Dr Ballard's voice discussed the finds. Recalling the splendour they'd witnessed throughout the tour, the hopes the ship had generated, the effort taken to build her and the pride so many people of Belfast had felt in her, their devastation at the loss of her and so many lives, she began to see what the new building symbolised. More than just a tourist attraction, a sign of the still fragile peace that claimed the country but an acknowledgement of the city's role, the possibility that it could reclaim what it had once been, have pride in it's accomplishments and itself again.

....and that's all...for now.

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